Hidden Paths

Submitted by The Way on Wed, 11/07/2012 - 17:58

Hidden in the shadows
Of a forest
Beneath the undergrowth
Is a wild path
Whispers of the trees
Guide the way
Songs of the Birds
Just ahead, but never in sight
Shaped by your thoughts
Never still, but moving
Follow the path of your dreams

Author's age when written
15
Genre
Notes

This is my favorite poem I've ever written, even if it is one of my older ones.

Comments

Well, not MY favourite of yours, but still good. I like the ending. Keep on writing! (did you notice that was a prompt to post more? Hehe...)

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thanks for reminding me to post more. I'm posting all my old poems till I get to my new ones but I keep forgetting. And thank you so much for reading my poems.