Immersing in Imagination: Chapter Four

Submitted by Maddi on Thu, 11/22/2012 - 06:00

Again, sorry its a short chapter. This thing called life is really holding me back. :) Just make sure you've read chapter 3 first. I think this one showed up before.

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Rilla tugged her hand, pulling her towards the Underwater Kingdom. As they got closer, Elise could see the market place. They weaved through the bustling merchants and curious sea folk towards a towering crystal castle. A school of brightly coloured fish were crossing what seemed to be a busy path. There were rich merfolk riding in shell carriages drawn by graceful blue dolphins.

The Elf-glade

Submitted by Jordan on Thu, 11/22/2012 - 04:04

So I did this description as an exercise in the middle of last year. What I had to do was to basically cause the reader to be able to imagine the whole place. Bring it to life, if you will. Tell me what you think. Hope you like it.

The Elf-glade - by me.

Dragons are Awesome

Submitted by Kayleen on Tue, 11/20/2012 - 23:17

This letter is in response to the essay "Dragons are Evil" by Benjamin.

To: the Free Peoples of Arda, Eraioch, and Drahawn and their leaders.

The Royal Palace of Ariania  

The ninth day of the ninth month,

Two-thousand-twelve years into the second Age 

A letter from Lord Malachi Damusaun,

As dictated to Ethaniel Svykadar, Crown Prince and heir to the throne of Ariania,

To the leaders of the Free Peoples of Arda, Eraioch, and Drahawn:

 

Missing the Song

Submitted by Emilee on Tue, 11/20/2012 - 19:02

Missing the Song

The dissonance of the stained,
soiled keys-
played over, again and again.
Chaotic notes are leaping-
alive from-
the wood and ivory.

The musician-
wanting order-
for his chaotic song.
Searching for sense-
lost in rhythm,
Regulation.

The chord that’s strummed echoes-
soft and sad;
dripping audible tears-
on the bound world around it.
Brushed away-
by rough, unfeeling hands.

Trapped

Submitted by Flying Past Clouds on Sun, 11/18/2012 - 22:20

Staring forlornly
Out the window
I'm trapped

But not by force
But merely by choice
I'm trapped

I still have the chance
To turn around
But I'm trapped

I don't want to be
The third wheel again
So I'm trapped

I'd run away
But there's nowhere to go
I'm trapped

I'm trapped

Warfare

Submitted by Benjamin on Sat, 11/17/2012 - 23:12

This was a timed essay. I was given 10 minutes in which to write it. As such, it will be somewhat rough. Any criticism or ideas for improvement will be very welcome.