Animosity
My perplexity
A redundant thought
Some small worries fraught
Heart-torn and bleary
Blinded and weary
Sentences framed
Tongue is now aimed
Give me discretion
Show me my lesson
Diminish my fears
Wipe away my tears
I can't understand
But I won't demand
Please Lord, give me sight
Let me be alright
I want to trust You
Your promises true
Delight in Your will
Heart of mine, be still
Look up for the Light
His love gives us sight
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It was left hanging because at the moment when I wrote it I was left hanging (in an emotional sense) as well. :) so you read it JUST RIGHT!! That makes me super happy. :)
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
Damari!
Your writing has become better and better, and this was beautiful. You truly have grown as a writer. I love the message in this.
My only comment was, is that it feels unfinished...left open-ended. Which is cool, but something like this I felt maybe it at least needed a full stop! Anyway, something to keep in mind for the future!
This is so beautiful...I just love it! Its very similar to something I'm going through at the moment..so I related :)
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh