She moves across the sky,
silken sails billowing with light
bright ivory next to midnight.
Stars all around,
dancing though the dark
life radiating from each little spark.
Mysteries revealed,
if just for a while
hiding within the Moon's secret smile.
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Loved this. Every line. Describes the moon perfectly. Love love it. :D
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
Saw it so well...
...especially:
"silken sails billowing with light
bright ivory next to midnight."
...which just illuminated my whole brain with light!!
Liked your poem.
The moon has always seemed very feminine to me. I don't get why poeple say '' man in the moon.''