I didn’t know the someone Who left us with this smold’ring In our minds; who left us holding Less, and wond’ring what had gone. And watching from the pew-side, Her good friend praying, clinging To the railing; mem’ry ringing, With her smile before she’d died, I saw her shaking, sinking, To the floor, and felt my weakness, Looking on and standing, helpless – Asking then what all were thinking: What is this empty evening? God, why have You shred these faces? Lord of Mercy, filled their glasses With the bitterest of wine? --- Later on I heard her brother Barely reading what he’d written – That she’d never be forgotten, That he’d loved her like no other, And his voice became unsteady, (Had some mem’ry of his sister Crossed his eye?) His words were Halting, and his sorrow free. And I, who was a stranger, Bowed my head in silence, broken, Wond’ring at the words he’d spoken, Reeling in the painful wonder: “Tell your family, tell your friends, What I wasn’t there to tell her; I wish that I had been there, And I will see her, soon, again.” --- And now, the dwindling rays Of this dark Friday’s evening Are sketching shadows, leaving Traces of the grief-struck day, And I’m, in silence, sitting; Dim reflections of this glory Have begun to overcome me; All that I have left is trusting That the smile she had while with us Was like a candle, flick’ring In the darkness of our misery Of a traveler through this earth; And that her smile, now with You, Has become a brilliant burning; And though we remain in mourning, Hers is everlasting joy.
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I must agree with James. I liked the rhyme and meter, it had a softeness and flowed easily. Not to mention that the poem itself is sad, and beautiful.
trying not to be melodramatic
That was gorgeous. Just thought you should know.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
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This makes me want to cry and rejoice all at the same time, Ezra.
But I think that's often the effect death has for Christians.
So beautiful.
Thanks All
Has anyone read Tennyson's poem of similar title? It's good.
"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]
Tennyson
I just read it now... it's quite profound.
... but in some ways I think I like yours better.
This is beautiful
This is beautiful and...moving. Just lovely.
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
Well Written
Death is a hard thing to write about. You did it well.
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