Faster,
Run faster,
its slipping
Slipping past my fingertips,
trying to hold
tight
through the dips and
dives of my
flight,
true to the wind,
I spin
flying uncontrollably,
I know I won't win
fighting against the wind
now,
the fight
of my flight,
as it slips through my fingers
the fight
thefight,
its hard
toohard,
my hands go limp
and my wings go numb
spinning, crashing, falling,
I cant escape.
the feeling,
I'm failing
I'm losing the fight,
screaming, crying
I stop fighting,
I fall
I'll let You catch me
Now.
Comments
Mon, 02/01/2016 - 17:34
In reply to This is beautiful! I love by Damaris Ann
Thank you so much! It's great
Thank you so much! It's great to hear positive feedback :)
Wed, 02/03/2016 - 19:48
In reply to Thank you so much! It's great by Elliot Hawthorne
Powerful
'I fall
I'll let You catch me
Now.'
Yay. I really enjoyed this, Elliot! A fantastic kick-off for your AP life! Welcome aboard and keep posting.
When I worship, I would rather my heart be without words than my words be without heart.
Thanks!!!
Thank you so much! It's been great getting all of this positive feedback when I'm a brand new user :)
Oh. My. Goodness.
I LOVE THIS COMPLETELY! This is my favorite poem!!!!!!! I have a lot of those, but, you know... STILL!!!!!
The line breaks and flow really captured a feeling of flightyness (if that's a word) and desperation. GENIUS!!!!!!!!!! I loved this line: 'The fight of my flight'! A beautiful poetic phrase right there!
Anyway, thank you for this wonderful poem! It brought a smile to my face and an image to my head.
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This is beautiful! I love
This is beautiful! I love this:
"true to the wind,
I spin
flying uncontrollably,
I know I won't win"
Altogether lovely.
Welcome to ApricotPie! I'm always so excited when we get a new member. :) I hope you enjoy it here! I can't wait to see your future posts.
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