Musical

Submitted by Damaris Ann on Wed, 05/18/2016 - 05:46

Lightning flashes across the sky,
Thunder rumbles a lullaby;
Soft and deep, very sweet and low,
Wind hums along, breathy and slow.
Tree branches gently dip and sway;
Waltzing the moonlit night away.
Raindrops kissing the cool night air,
Stars twinkling with light-beams fair.
Rustic theatre sets the scene
For a concert and play serene.
Handiwork of a mighty Lord:
A musical you can afford.

Author's age when written
18
Genre
Poetry
Tags
creation
God
music
Rain
thunder
storms

Comments

Kassady

Thu, 05/19/2016 - 15:00

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How lovely! It paints such a vivid scene... I can almost smell a storm coming, the rain in the air... After reading I feel like I could close my eyes and be surrounded by that music.... Gorgeous! Love the rythme as well!

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Madeline

Thu, 05/19/2016 - 19:14

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The rhythm in this is perfect, & I love your word choice...the whole piece is so melodic! My favorite bit has to be Tree branches gently dip and sway;
Waltzing the moonlit night away. So many plush words just in that sentence alone! It's like a lullaby, this work--very nice!