I just remembered
That I dreamt about you
Looking at me
As if I was something special
I said you hadn't changed
Your eyes deftly flicked up and down
And you said
You have
With pleasant surprise
But I put those words in your mouth
And I knew they were coming before they were out
I almost kissed you but fell to your side
At the last second
Afraid of what it would feel like
Then the dream loses all purpose
Becomes a blur of villains and threats
The cinemascape of my mind
But I remember those crucial few seconds when I
Saw you looking so deeply into my eyes
And you were manufactured from
What I knew you as then
Yet it's got me thinking
About what would happen
Between us
If we were given a chance
There are so many uncertainties but
One day from afar
I thought I saw you
Coming toward me
My heart skipped a beat
And I waited
Anxiously
Thinking
No
And of course it was not
Comments
Wow... Just wow! This is
Wow... Just wow! This is incredible Homey! Like, ultra, super, duper amazing incredible! It was so haunting and in a way dreamlike! I'd love to know the backstory if you're up for sharing! I just love! Love! Love! Wish I could say more, but I don't know what to say! It's incredible!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Thank you guys so much!
Thank you guys so much!
The flow of this is so
The flow of this is so lovely, and the imagery and the dream-ish feel and like what Erin said, it isn't confusing. :) Love!
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
Thank you so much! And
Thank you so much! And Maaaaaadddddiiiii when are you going to post something again?! haha!
This is great! I loved how
This is great! I loved how you gave it a dreamlike quality without it being confusing.
But I put those words in your mouth
And I knew they were coming before they were out (I like)
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond