My sisters in the garden;
her fine hair spreading wider, she
opens up her face to me
Shy little thing.
My brothers in the fields,
their bodies stretching higher,
reaching reaching touch the sun
So quick to claim the hour.
Who can hear them speak?
Ah, I have heard a thousand voices
listened to a thousand songs
but here they sound so different, so
familiar. I think:
they must be kin to me.
For who but a sister could understand
who else would strain to hear the noise of the field
when the wind sweeps over it;
to whom else would my sister show her face?
Who else but a grower thinks:
They must be kin to me.
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Hmmm....I can feel the pulse
Hmmm....I can feel the pulse of growing things....
Lovely.
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
What a beautiful
What a beautiful thought.
Well done and delightfully enjoyable- as always. :)
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Wow! This was REALLY good! I loved the whole feeling of it! The writing was sooo cool!
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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine
That was lovely!
That was lovely! very nice job!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Excellently beautiful.
Excellently beautiful.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond