The golden light burns, glows, smolders The doorstep of night…. flutters, ripples, flees, amongst Dark shadow’s shade…. The branches receive, uphold, bear The eve of springtime…. hover, reach, display, before Airy palate blue…. The bitter breeze sweeps, twirls, heralds The icy morn’s dew…. flies, soars, brushes, the land with Cape of numbing cold……..
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I absolutely love it!! Welcome in spring. :)
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"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis
i like it
I like this, especially the way you did some of it in italics... it was different, it gave it a different kind of flowy-ness... Really lovely!
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It's so unique and beautiful and lovely! I love it!
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
This was simply stunning,
This was simply stunning, Elizabeth!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
stunning!
stunning! awesome!
Excellent!
This is wonderful, love it. :)
Katie:-)
"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS
This poem is so vivid, I can
This poem is so vivid, I can imagine everything clearly! Beautiful job, Elizabeth! :)