Battered

Submitted by Bernadette on Mon, 01/04/2010 - 19:13

 

Tossed by the sea’s great waves

And battered by the wailing wind.

The storm is crashing, the rain is pouring.

The sides are creaking, the sail is fallen.

 

Dark sky and grey sea

High prow and broken timbers.

Down, down, down.

Below, below, below.

Storm, storm.

Beneath.

 

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This was really good!!! Love it, Bernadette!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Bernadette, this rocks!!!

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

 I really, sincerely, positively, love it! 

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