Class

Submitted by Brianna on Wed, 09/02/2009 - 14:28

Sunlight through the window crack

cannot look away from that

shining something from beyond

more than words, going round and round

 

Breaking artificial light

raising minds to greater heights 

simple beauty it may be

but it's something great to me

 

Blue skies beg for wind through hair

warmth and light are right out there

how much longer will it be

before it gets a hold of me?

 

Kinds of knowing... I know for sure

trees are greener than chalkboards

Epistemology, deduction, concept

quick write it down before you forget

 

Another hand, another hour

one more moment and I will follow

lines of people out the door

into bright sunshine once more.

Author's age when written
19
Genre
Poetry
Tags
college
classes

Comments

Mairead

Wed, 09/02/2009 - 14:46

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Haha, which class were you in when you wrote this? Krason? :) I loved it, though. Simple and sweet.

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Elizabeth

Wed, 09/02/2009 - 22:35

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This was really a neat poem! I love the whole way you wrote it!!!!

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Sarah B.

Sat, 09/05/2009 - 00:49

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I've written poems like this before. :) This one was really great! The fourth verse sounded a little out of place, like the rhyme and rhythm sceme was broken, but on the whole, really simple and elegant. I loved it. :)

Clare Marie

Sat, 09/05/2009 - 01:54

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This was so cool!!  I love the rhythm...really unique. :)

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