1.
You make a valentine of galaxies
The universe is your love letter
Though we’re stained and torn
You laid down your life for us, so insignificant
So we could be your bride—
Whiter than snow.
2.
And I’ll ride away on my Heart Air Balloon
Fly off to the sky
Away from the HeartbreakLands where now I dwell
And I will be the Queen of Hearts.
But I will miss the seashells,
And there are things I cannot forget…
3.
‘Twas a fine day at sea
When you sat by the waves
And you were so free
The moon made you feel brave
There were stars in your eyes
You kept climbing higher
But through your disguise
I saw the fire
Inside it was burning
Consuming your soul
How great is the yearning?
Do you feel not quite whole?
4.
I look at you through eyes of wonder
Fascination
And I wonder if
Wish that
Maybe, you feel the same
We two, we’re very different
Artsy vs. Scientific
But don’t opposites attract?
I can’t say much about it
For fear I’ll go too far
But you’ve got my interest spiked.
Sigh…
I think that I’m in like.
5.
Isn’t it funny
When you’re supposed to be in bed
And you turn on your flashlight
To finish that page of your book,
But pages turn into chapters, chapters to "The End"
And still you spend the rest of the night pretending a sequel
And fashioning your own stories till dawn?
Isn’t it funny how
for you, an AdventureSmith
One is easily a crowd?
Comments
I always get a little
I always get a little nervous when people use that word...
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"I for one am getting bored, and boredom is something up with which I will not put!" ~Phineas and Ferb
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
I liked it, although some of
I liked it, although some of it I didn't quite understand.
Also, I just posted the Prologue of a story I wrote. It's finished, so I'll probably post around once a week. It's called The Tale of the Long Darkness.
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"Give the password," said the chief soldier.
"This is my password," said the King as he drew his sword. " 'The light is dawning; the lie broken'. Now guard thee, miscreant, for I am Tirian of Narnia!" --
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The best stories are those that are focused, unassuming, and self-confident enough to trust the reader to figure things out. --
http://lauraeandrews.blogspot.com/2014/05/dont-tell-me-hes-smart.html
Well, some of it is just
Well, some of it is just random... 1 is kind of an Easter poem, 2 is downright nonsense (I wrote it on a paper placemat at a restaurant), 3 was mostly nonsense too, though in some ways it's like a story without an ending, 4... well, to be honest, I'd rather leave 4 to speak for itself, and 5 is how I feel when I stay up all night reading.
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"I for one am getting bored, and boredom is something up with which I will not put!" ~Phineas and Ferb
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
:D *~*~*~*~*~*~*~* If I
:D
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If I disappear, and you cannot find me, please don't worry.
Just be sure to check all the wardrobes.
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
OK, OK...
Interesting in a good way. And enjoyable.
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"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer
"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]
As Ezra said, interesting. I
As Ezra said, interesting. I do like it though!
~Erin~
"So, I'm like the Jonas Brothers' evil stepbrother? Okay." -Adam Lambert on People Say He Looks Like Joe Jonas
"Perhaps he's that Neevil! Tally-ho! Tantivy! Cut him off! Round him up! Keep it up! Hurrah!" Talking Animals in Magician's Nephew
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
I like the third one... it
I like the third one... it makes me think of Eisley, except not as nonsense as Eisley, which is what I can't stand about Eisley, so therefore I like your poem...
And the last one sounds like me five years ago. :) I would read in bed at night, I remember switching the flashlight off and flopping down on top of my book when my parents came in to check on us.
I used to be really good at playin' 'possum...
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“The venerable dead are waiting in my library to entertain me and relieve me from the nonsense of surviving mortals.”
- Samuel Davies
:)
I like it. I think 5 is my favorite. I like how they're all kind of... smooth. Like talking, but with a kind of tempo. Anyway, very good. ;)
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"Haven't you ever heard the term,'quiet as mice'?"
--Lemon (or was it Lime?)
1-is really really good! I
1-is really really good! I like the "valentine of galaxies" thought, that was so cool!
2-Sounds like it could be funny...
3-Really does sound like there needs to be a story with it!
4-Is exactly how I feel! Except I'd say "I think I'm in love..." :0)
5-Adventuresmith! Really, really cool! I remember doing this too.
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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"
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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"
4: Well, considering I'm not
4: Well, considering I'm not even 14 yet, don't plan on dating, and am trying to forget my crush on this unnamed guy.... :)
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"I for one am getting bored, and boredom is something up with which I will not put!" ~Phineas and Ferb
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Good for you on not dating,
Good for you on not dating, etc!
And yeah, I got that... :0)...just thought it was funny how it fit me and Justin perfectly!
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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"
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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"
I like it, but I honestly
I like it, but I honestly can't describe numbers three and four. It's good though, don't worry.
"True love is the greatest thing in the world - except for a nice MLT - mutton, lettuce and tomato sandwich, when the mutton is nice and lean, and the tomato is ripe." - Miracle Max, from The Princess Bride
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
;-D
Number 4...Anna, I totally know what you are going through:) No more will be said about that at this present time. Anyway, hilarious!!! I have no idea why I didn't comment sooner....it's probably because I've been REALLY busy lately.
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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville
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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville
Hmm...
Interesting.
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"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer
"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]