Snow,
Like a sacrilege to step upon it.
Snow,
Treading in the steps I came in.
Snow,
With such intricacy God made each tiny jewel.
Snow,
In little puffs God's peace expressed
Snow,
I wonder if Adam ever saw it.
Snow,
If so, he chose the most gentle of names to name it.
Snow,
Stop and listen and you'll hear the sound that silence makes,... and through the quiet you'll hear God whisper,"See this? It is my gift to you."
"Snow."
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Great job! If it were
Great job!
If it were farther toward the beginning of winter rather than my "I-REALLY-WANT-WINTER-TO-END-NOW" I would probably appreciate it way more, though! So sorry for my lack of enthusiasm as I might have had earler. :/
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In this sinful world there is no such thing as "peace" unless someone strong enough is willing to protect and defend it. -Norm Bomer, God's World News
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Oh, that's so beautiful!!!
Oh, that's so beautiful!!! Awesome job, Juliette!
Welcome to AP, btw. :)
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"Elves and Dragons! Cabbages and potatoes are better for me and you. Don't go getting mixed up in the business of your betters, or you'll land in trouble too big for you." — Hamfast Gamgee (the Gaffer)
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
Very nice
Very lovely, Lady J! Welcome to AP, by the way. Hey - that rhymed! lol.
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"I am a dreamer, take me higher, open the sky up, start a fire...I beleive, even if it's just a dream." -Bethany Dillon
Oh, that's beautiful!
Oh, that's beautiful! Wonderful thoughts and expressions in this poem. I love it! I love how snow sparkles, and you're right about hearing the silence. As odd a comparison as this is, when I play war games on the computer and I'm in a winter setting, they put that sound on the game(yes I know that was a strange thing to say, but I had particularly thought of that, so, whatever). Absolutely lovely poem.
"A wizard is never late, nor is he early; he arrives presicely when he means to." Gandalf