Black and Red

Submitted by Bernadette on Tue, 07/08/2008 - 19:59

Thunderfire
Great in stature
Tall above all horses
Strong are his muscles

And limbs that carry him
Dark is his coat
And fire is his eyes

Black mane and tail
Wind whipping through
Wind licking the feather of his hooves
Thunder
Releases when they pound
On the ground faster than
Speed of light
His neigh
Powerful as raging storms

Hooves of thunder
Eyes of fire
Thunderhooves
The Thunderfire

Author's age when written
10
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Comments

Bernadette, this was really good!! I love your descriptions. :)

Luv,
Clare

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