In the depths of sky-blue eyes,
I’m entranced, I’m mesmerized.
My heart was captured in a beat
And that alone is quite a feat.
Your smile was so soft, sincere,
It banished every single fear.
And as I held your gaze in mine,
It seemed that God had stopped all time.
I could not move, nor could I breathe.
How could I bring myself to leave?
I knew though that I could not stay,
But it seemed my heart would not obey.
The pain had begun to take its toll,
When I found refuge in your soul,
As you proclaimed your love for me,
Yet I must wait for this to be.
You smiled more brightly, as did I,
when I realized it was not goodbye,
But instead the promise of future joy
with this blond-haired, blue-eyed boy.
For now I know that I must wait,
Until that promised day of fate,
When God will bring us both together,
Into a love that will last forever.
Comments
Thanks Erin!
Erin,
Glad you loved it! Thanks for letting me know!
God Bless,
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Sorry I didn't read until now but...
Great! :)
(((as always)))
Fri, 07/29/2011 - 23:50
In reply to Sorry I didn't read until now but... by Madeline
Thanks :)
Homeschoolgirl,
Glad you liked it! Don't worry about the late comment! I am just thrilled you got the chance and took the time to let me know you read and liked it! I will see what I can do about writing something else to post here because I know I haven't posted anything in a while. I apologize, but I have been extremely busy with work related stuff.
God Bless,
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Amazing!!!
Truelly Amazing!!! I loved this, the rythme and the wording was incredable!!! Well done and a round of applause!!!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Thanks Kass!
Thanks Kassady for taking the time to comment :) Sorry I haven't posted any new stuff lately, but I have been incredibly busy this summer. Look for some new stuff soon though because I will be going back to college soon and will probably be writing for stress relief haha! God Bless!
Wings of Eternity
"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12
Didn't realize I had already read this...
Didn't realize I had already read this--and read it again! Even better the second time. Your rhythm is fantastic. :)
Well, anyways! (haha) I know how busy things can get, so post again whenever you can!
~HomeschoolGirl ;D
Love it :)
Love it :)
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond