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The Portal-Dreamer Chronicles: Kirthanin ~Chapter Three:Sulaire

Submitted by Julie on Sat, 05/30/2009 - 19:24

The next two days seemed to drag on for the inexperianced riders, but finally Valzaan announced that Sulaire was just over the next hill.
Trav inhaled deeply. "Mmmm… I havn't smelled the ocean since I was seven."
Galadriel looked about in wonder at the shore of Sulaire. “I thought Florida was nice, but this…it’s amazing.” The unnamed trees and flowers swayed gently, filling the air with a fragrence finer than perfume.
Frodo could hardly breath "It is beautiful." she whispered.

The PortalDreamer Chronicles: Kirthanin ~Chapter Two: Journeys

Submitted by Julie on Sat, 05/30/2009 - 17:59

Chapter Two: Journeys
As the group dispensed, Galadriel hung back. "Ciao, can I talk to you? I really have no idea how I got here. I was glancing through Beyond the Summerland on the way to church, and suddenly I was...here. Do you know how to get home? And how much can we intefer without consquences? What will happen at he Forbidden Isle? I have no desire to be captured by Malekim. What's going to happen to us?"
"You won't need to be rescued. I'll kill all the Malekim."Ezra stated.