Sorry for those of you who are reading Unsortable--there are a few more chapters that I need to post, but I'll probably have to wait until next week to do it! :)
I'm trying out some new poems after reading After the Kiss (amazing) by Terra Elan McVoy. It was such a great book, and I loved the poetry style.
So, here goes nothing.
-Homey
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Fly By
simple pleasures
...taken
for
granted
every day
coffee brewing
a drop of rain
sprig of sunshine
books
a breeze
this song
you and me sitting
on the porch
holding hearts
in
hands
yet these things go
without a
s e c o n d
thought
and we don't
really love them
until the
moment's
passed
Graze
a stray hand
upon my
knee
cheeks go
red
eyes go
wide
heart goes
fast
smile goes
timid
feet go
tap tap
nervously
on the pavement
hand goes
tap tap
nervously on my
knee
and you
seem to know
this graze
is
everything I
need
Comments
I have NO idea!
I have NO idea!! That's a good point. :D
Thanks, Kass! I like this poetry style because of the jumbled-ness, too!
This style of poetry is one
This style of poetry is one of my favorites :) I enjoyed this a lot, it was really cute.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Thank you!
Thank you! I love this style, too--I just need to figure out what it's called. LOL!
Excellent use of style. I
Excellent use of style. I also just like the content a lot.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Awesome!
What is the meter? This was really cool! I liked the jumbled message of it! Please post of this stuff!
Write on!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!