There is a wind that whispers through the cold day and swirls through the colder night
There is a wind that comes from unknown places and hurries on into the haze
There is a wind that sighs with pleasure in the harvest fields and rattles happily in the treetops
There is a wind that carries falling leaves and drops them at your feet as you pass by
There is a wind that pierces fabric and dances with sharp steps on your warm skin
There is a wind that brings the smell of smoke mixed with spices in the brisk air
There is a wind that calls for fires, hot drinks, warm food, and close friendship
There is a wind that cavorts with joy outside a glowing window where families rest
There is a wind that catches voices in the night lifted high in love and praise
There is a wind that echoes with worship as it passes villages and castles miles away
There is a wind that fingers your hair as you walk beside a beloved friend
There is a wind that places words in your mouth to break the growing silence in the dark
There is a wind that lifts your arm to the waiting shoulders of the one beside you
There is a wind that guards the secrets breathed between you into the chilly air of night
There is a wind that pushes you close into the arms of one you thought was so far away
There is a wind that melts the tears as your hand lightly brushes those shimmering eyes
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Good job. Was there any
Good job. Was there any particular inspiration for this?
Wow. I loved this piece. It
Wow. I loved this piece. It was so lovely.
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Love me, love my friends.
-Anne of the Island
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
I was partly inspired by a
I was partly inspired by a past fall camp I have been to as a leader and one that I will be going on this fall. It is also just some thoughts on how I feel about fall and winter in general.
Lovely as always dear :) It
Lovely as always dear :) It partly made me sad that I couldn't immediately run outside into the wind like a kid. Its a lovely transition piece that really speaks to both kids and adults - and the ending was just perfect and romantic.
Lovely.
Lovely.
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
Thanks, everyone. :) I'm
Thanks, everyone. :) I'm glad the ending worked out well.
Good job, Timothy!
This is a really pretty piece. I love how you describe the different winds. My favorite line is "There is a wind that guards the secrets breathed between you into the chilly air of night..."
Despite your prejudices when you were younger, you are a great non-rhyming poet! :0)
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The successful writer of a Fairy Story makes a Secondary World which your mind can enter
~JRR Tolkien
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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"
Wow. I love this! It
Wow. I love this! It reminds me a lot of somebody I know.
"The meek tyrannosaurus, victim of an innocent misunderstanding, tears like heck across the prehistoric valley." - Calvin and Hobbes
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
:)
This was very beautifully done, Timothy. I loved it.
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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa