falling for you

Submitted by little woman on Wed, 12/26/2012 - 18:54

falling for you
slowly
wondering if you and I could ever be
we
thinking of you
before I fall asleep
do you ever think
of me?

Author's age when written
16
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Comments

This poem is so simply beautiful and brilliant! The ending was so perfect:

do you ever think
of me?

You capture that feeling perfectly.

I can only echo what Homey said, so....this is perfect.

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

I feel like this should have a simple, lullaby tune I could hum while I brush my hair...

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief