This place I love's my destination:
A town with little population
But without too much isolation.
I'll rest beneath sky's dome.
Can’t stop my hearts acceleration!
Of slowing it shows no indication.
I simply cannot resist temptation
To find my way back Home.
Comments
I LOVED this! So awesome...i
I LOVED this! So awesome...i really like the sounds you chose to ryme. They weren't simple and predictable like love and dove and above...lame overused ones like that! IT WAS EPIC!!!
Katherine Rae!
You, young lady, are far too unappreciative of your own skills. This is GREAT. As Clare said, the vocabulary rocks, and I love the rhythym and just the content and everything...love love love it. I edited your post on TGO where you called it "a lame attempt". Poo! It's awesome. *hug*
Katie:-)
"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS
Thanks!
Aww! *hugs* Thanks both of you! I'm glad to know you like it! ::D
So short and sweet!
I like this poem of yours, Kat. I especially like the very last phrase. There's no place quite like home!
- Lily (pray4priests)
Hey, I didn't know you posted something!
*poke* This is awesome! I realllly really like it. Welcome to AP, girlfriend!
-Katie