*** This doesn't really go as "poetry" because it's actually lyrics to a song I've written.... Too bad I can't post the music, but I really like the words (of course I do, I wrote it!) and I hope you will too. The story of the song can speak for itself, but it's essentially God speaking to someone that ignores Him, and pushes Him away, and thinks He doesn't care about him. Or her. Enjoy. :)***
How can you say I'll never come back?
Have you not watched me always come back?
Do you think this time I won't come back?
How can I live without you in my heart?
How can I let you slip away tonight?
Like a bright smooth breeze
On summer's day
I never want to see you go away
Tonight
How do you think I don't care what you say?
I've always wanted to talk you've just never come my way
Do you think I'm going to throw you out of reach?
How can I live without you in my heart?
How can I let you slip away tonight?
Like a bright, smooth breeze
On summer's day
I never want to see you go away
Tonight
I never want to see you go away
I made this heaven so you could stay with me
And now you're telling me you want to leave
And there you go, now you've betrayed me
For a bite of something
That will never please your heart
Only I can do that
How can I let you slip away tonight?
Like a bright smooth breeze
On summer's day
I never want to see you go away
Tonight
Oh come back to me
Tonight
Oh darling come back to me
Tonight
Come right back to me
Tonight
Comments
I don't know.... it's just
I don't know.... it's just the way I work through my emotions, I guess. :)
niceee..
niceee!! oh have you read my new poem seasons? its not as good as yours but you should have a look :)
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Wow... this is SO pretty, Michelle. I love it.
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
thanks
thanks bridget!...or were you talking to sarah?? lol!
Bridget: I wrote this,
Bridget: I wrote this, michelle wrote the other one. :)
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Oops. Yeah, I was talking to Sarah Anne. Somehow I got the idea that Michelle had written this.
"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya
hahaha!
hahaha! thats okay bridget! little mistake :) but if you want to read somthing by me look up my name and you can read my peoms :)
Sarah, this is sooo pretty!!
Sarah, this is sooo pretty!! Just beautiful. :) <3
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
This is really
This is really beautiful...very touching.
wow. I'm glad my writing has
wow. I'm glad my writing has touched somebody... I have to sing this soon at a concert and I'm hoping it has the same effects on the audience as it did for the people on AP. :)
wow..
wow amazing!! how do you come up with theese things? i didnt get it at first but when it said " i made this heaven so you could stay with me" it all made sence. loved it sarah!! <3