Rainbow
(An acronym)
Rain is falling to the ground,
Anywhere and everywhere I see water dripping down.
I look up and search the sky of clouds.
Now I see a place where sun beams fall through,
Brilliant shades of red, orange, yellow, green, and the rest,
One after the first flowing in a breathtaking arch of colors,
Wonderful and glorious is God’s great creation,
Comments
A clever concept - and very
A clever concept - and very well executed! I liked how you said "One after the first" rather than using the old, cliched, "one after the other".
Lovely.
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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!
Thanks
Thanks! i really didnt think about it at the time, Mary Its just what I wrote.
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Pretty, Kay--I like