Yarrow (Aida and Zander)

Submitted by Hannah W. on Mon, 11/16/2009 - 17:47

**A poem of two perspectives. It was written while I thought about the two main characters of my (other) novel. Aida's people are a race descended from Dryads, and... well, I hate to give the plot away, so glean what you will from the poem.**


Aida:
Upon a river, quickly streaming
swollen with the rain
carrying along the dreamings
washing past our pain

Zander:
Beside a river, quickly streaming,
watching you come near
I hear you falling, screaming,
I see your eyes of fear

Aida:
Out of the river, cold and shaking
I realize that I have crossed
I must leave before the breaking
of the peace that is now lost

Zander:
You cross the river, quickly darting
into the thick, dark trees
I wonder at your parting
with such a hurry on your feet

Aida:
Far from the river, I am thinking
in this wound I have flung salt
and now my heart is sinking
for I know it is my fault

You must not know about my secret
for my people I uphold
I must stay away, and keep it
before the horror all unfolds

A border accidentally crossed at night
is now the cause of burning fear
It will never be all right
while we flee like wounded deer

Zander:
Far from the river I can't stay
I want to come again
I wonder if there is no way
we could still be friends?

Aida:
In this darkest hour, I look to you
for my own have cast me out
I find that I trust you despite
my constant, inner doubts

But betrayal now so deep
like autumn leaves I fall away
there is a secret I cannot keep
even for another day

Zander:
I swear I knew nothing of
this fire that burns within
and ever pulses through my blood
and may swallow everything

They say that it should bring such hate
bursting forth from my burning hands
They say that it should desecrate
your peaceful forest lands

Both:
But if we two join together now,
it is our only chance
to change the things that forward plow
and tear and chop and crash

So find the truth and halt the pain
stop the slaughter of innocents
and then perhaps we may remain
in a peaceful, safe distance


...


Aida: 
My heart is oak, your blood is fire
but there are such things I feel...
If wood and fire become only ash,
let yarrow grow, and heal. 

Author's age when written
14
Genre

Comments

This excites me beyond credibility!!

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

ding! you wrote a wondeful, wonderful, wonderful poem! I loved it. (I think I understand some of the plot now, but I'm still mystified)

Post. Your. Novel. Now.

OR I WILL BE VERY INCREDIBLY ANGRY!!! Lol. That was fantastic, entrancing, awe-inspiring and.....and......Wow. You jsut make such incredible characters, Hannah. My favorite part is the last, when Aida is speaking. Haunting.

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

So...amazing!! I'm in love with the novel already!

I love Zander's part where he speaks about the fire in his veins. And the last stanza where Aida speaks is haunting and gorgeous! Especially, I like the "My heart is oak, your blood is fire..." line.

This is such a cool idea, writing poems about your characters! I wish I could do that!!

 

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And now our hearts will beat in time/You say I am yours and you are mine...
Michelle Tumes, "There Goes My Love"

 You have, as my brother once said, "grabbed me by the gizzard"!!  I can't wait to read the novel!

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

This was soooo awesome!!!! The rhythm was so lovely.....

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

AWESOMENESS.

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Thanks so much, everybody!!! Writing poems about/for characters is fun.... And it actually solved my writer's block. ;P
Actually, I'm trying to get this book published, so maybe you all could read it someday! Signed copies for all! Hehe. :)

Is the book finished???  Wow.  And the poem makes me want to read the book, so hurry, publish, post, do something!

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya