The Wise Fear Water

Submitted by Hannah W. on Thu, 03/29/2012 - 21:28

All wise men fear water.
They fear drowning, in too deep
they fear rain dripping steadily onto the street
they always carry umbrellas and
they never look at seas.

When I was young, I saw a river
Due to drought, it was growing thinner.
Stones were like gems inside it and
the fish were just like silver.

The water was streaming onward fast
not a hard-smooth mirror or a sheet of glass.
I reached my hand into it and
I felt it rushing past.

I fell headfirst, dragged down deep
the river swept me off my feet.
I was pulled on by the current and
carried to the sea.

All wise men fear water, but
they can't swim like me.

Author's age when written
17
Genre

Comments

How great! I really like the stanza

The water was streaming onward fast
not a hard-smooth mirror or a sheet of glass.
I reached my hand into it and
I felt it rushing past.

 

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

Extremely amazing. Your poetry blows my mind!

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

This is so good! The descriptions are lovely and wonderful! :)

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

I really, really like the topic of this poem!!!!!!! Loved the end; loved the whole thing!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine