What will come of this
A wrong decision
Broken thoughts
Beating hearts
A bittersweet sensation
In the fall
The freedom lost
The knowledge gained
What is the cost
Of ignorance
Hearts crack
Lives are lost
Souls cry out
For something more
The battles rage
Ours skys go dark
Our thoughts grow cold
With glad remorse
The clouds roll in
The rains fall down
Something new begins
Oh the beauty of grace
The sun comes again
And dries our tears
There is bitter joy
In hearts won
And hearts lost
What brings us to this
Broken thoughts
beating hearts. . .
Comments
Dude Tami that was a really
Dude Tami that was a really great poem....your getting really good.
excellent!
My thoughts are broken all the time.....lol!
Wonderful...sobering, but
Wonderful...sobering, but wonderful nonetheless.
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This was beautifully done. I especially loved how you ended it. :)
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"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis
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simple and eloquent.... I love it!
wow
Broken thoughts - beating hearts...
This is a beautiful poem Tam - thanks for sharing it...
Keep up the good work!