I can assert without fear of contradiction that there is gold dust in your eyes,
from whichever angle I look I can see it there glittering exactly like what it is.
But for some unknowable reason you always shift them away to avoid meeting mine.
I think it true and I am living in the conviction that you don’t want them to be seen.
I was born with brown eyes, dark brown like the soil, and unrefined like rough stones,
and I will die with them, I don’t mind, my eyes are what they are and they see
just as well as yours. But even so I was puzzled when, as if in order to atone,
you said they were beautiful, but more so was I puzzled when I realized you meant it.
It leads to the inevitable conclusion that you saw only beauty with such beautiful eyes,
everywhere you looked, which I envied for I only ever saw beauty when I looked at you.
Strange that one can find beauty everywhere but in one’s self, but I beg you: rise.
Look up. Don’t shut the world out like it will spoil you, or the reverse, like you will spoil it.
I can promise you such a thing would never happen, but I can also explicitly convey
that the earth mourns it never gets to see you. Please don’t hide yourself away.
Such eyes could only reflect such a soul, and they are meant for seeing and being seen.
If I can step out with my eyes like coal, so can you follow me.
Comments
Thank you, the typo has been
Thank you, the typo has been fixed! My own fault for deciding to skip the proofreading :)
This was enchanting. The
This was enchanting. The voice of the writer paints such a clear picture... It's so fantastic and lovely, and thoughtful too.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
this is * * * * * 5 STARS!
wow. this is great. I want to save this to read later. heck if I care about typos!! this is beautiful. a big THANK U for writing!! i like how it's like a stream of consciousness, flowing from one thought to another. I liked the imagery of your eyes being like stones, and of the eyes personifying the human soul, afraid to spoil or be spoiled. I can soooo relate to this. beautiful....
Intriguing, as always. There
Intriguing, as always. There were two typos: It should be I only saw every beauty instead of I only every saw beauty. Also, you should eliminate either the so or the If in the last line. Everything else was perfect :)
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond