Flooded with tears,
Mind flooded with fears,
Flooded with rain,
But still you’re the same,
I wanna scream,
Flooding my ears with the desperate noise,
My heart sinking flooded with your hopeful joys.
You left a simple note,
Flooded with goodbyes and little white lies,
My tearstained heart flooded with sighs.
Wonder if she will feel this way because of you?
She’s got you and all I’ve got is the picture of us close to my heart,
Flooded with colors of us,
Flooded with history,
Flooded with what used to be,
I think if you and her are just fate,
Or if you’re just using her for bate,
Like you did me,
But I shut my heart’s iron gate,
From your breathtaking words as I told you,” You’re a little too late.”
Flooded with deceitful lies,
Flooded with promising cries,
Living with the fact I can’t have you back,
All the confidence I now lack,
Because of your powerful impact,
Flooded with sadness,
Flooded with a dying heart,
Flooded with memories of you.
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Thanks!
That was really
That was really sad..............
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The quality of mercy is not strain'd;
It droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven
Upon the place beneath: it is twice blessed;
It blesseth him that gives, and him that takes
"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca
hmmm....
I had just finished this book and in it the girls boyfriend dumped her and so I kinda based it on that book and how I thought she felt. As you can tell, I get very envolved in the books I read and you have to say my name a few times before I snap back to reality! =] Freak of nature? Yep, that's me!!!!
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Emily,
I like this piece, because you can really feel emotion behind it. Also, it's written in a very interesting way that gives it character.
Good job, keep writing.
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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa
Brianna,
I've always wanted to have somebody comment on my post the way I do and the way you did. You made my day! :)
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This is amazing but also
This is amazing but also extremely sad.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Yeah, sad was kind of the
Yeah, sad was kind of the plan! :)
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Ricky was L but he has the flu,
Lizzie was O but she homework to do,
Mitchell was E but probably got lost on the way,
So I'm all of love that could make it today.
-Shel Silverstien
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you did a good job!! =0
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The Truth will set you free.