Smoke and Seas

Submitted by Bernadette on Thu, 02/24/2011 - 18:59

Spin, spin, pulse and wind

Tempest, storm, pulse and whirl

Round, round, pounding clouds

Pulse, pulse, surge and beat

Dark, ash, cold and rain

Torn, torn, smoke and seas.

Surge, surge, swell and gale

Heave, turn, beat and wind

Grey, grey, tempest breath

Author's age when written

13

Genre

Comments

Thu, 02/24/2011 - 20:37

Every line made me want to fly in circles over a stormy sea.

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Fri, 02/25/2011 - 02:27

This poem had a nice flow to it.... it sounded like wind...

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Fri, 02/25/2011 - 15:44

This is really cool, I like the rhythm and the stormy tempest theme.