Everything looks as tiny as a dragonfly,
When you are soaring in the sky.
Soaring above the highest cloud,
Everything is quiet, not loud.
Amid the silence,
You are afar from violence.
In this silent affair,
Blow freely, will your hair.
Brightly colored are your wings,
They are such beautiful things.
While soaring, you will never want to come down,
Onto the noisy streets of the town.
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Why thank you, Brit!
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I like it! I didn't know you
I like it! I didn't know you put it up. I agree with the Brit, I like that part too.
"This is most inconvenient, as I have swarn to loath him for all eterinty". Elizabeth Pride and Prejudice
It awoke with a shrill shreak that can be trnaslated "How dare you leave me in this bed, when I am asleep and helpless?" My sister
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I thought it was brillant! good job with the wording! I like this the ending
While soaring, you will never want to come down,
Onto the noisy streets of the town.
Good job!
Ok my turn to say a quot! cool!
What ryms with "Macindaw'? said by Horus, in Rangers Apprentice, by John Flanagan
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
Yay Kendra
Yay Kendra!!!! I knew you hadn't died. Great poem. I like the part where it said,
"Brightly colored are your wings,
They are such beautiful things."
“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” Audrey Hepburn