(Be kind! I haven't written anything like this for a really long time! :D )
As I Look Upon the Cross
As I look upon the Cross I
See His Body pierced by nails,
Ripped by scourging,
All done by my sins.
As I look upon the Cross I
See the Crown of
Thorns so cruelly thrust upon His Head, the
Agony of His Eyes,
All done by my sins.
As I look upon the Cross I
See the Blood stinging His Eyes,
Sweat mingling with tears,
All done by my sins.
As I look upon the Cross I
Feel His shoulder wrenched by
The nails pulling His limbs,
Piercing his Hands,
All done by my sins.
As I look upon the Cross,
He hanging there pierced by
Thorns and Nails,
Mangled by Scourging,
Stretched until His body could no more,
All done by my sins.
Comments
good job!
Jessica,
Great job! I really like it. Good writing, too.
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
Wow
This is quite a vivid image.
"By his stripes we are healed"
Well done.
"There are no great men of God. There are only pitiful, sorry men whose God is great beyond measure." - Paul Washer [originally Jonathan Edwards]