Secret Things

Submitted by Kay J Fields on Tue, 04/28/2009 - 21:10

Down in the deep
Water dragons keep
Up in the sky
Dragon wings fly
Underneath the sun
Dragons run
Below on the earth
Dragons full of mirth
Down in the deep
Secrets keep
Up in the sky
Secrets fly
Underneath the sun
Secrets run
Below on the earth
Secrets of mirth
Not too far away
Dragon Secrets stay

Author's age when written
13
Genre

Comments

mmmhmm, dragons are cool. I love dragons. great poem; very expressive.

"Oh lovely snowball, packed with care
Smack a head that's unaware.
Then with freezing ice to spare
Melt and soak through underwear!
Fly straight and true, hit hard and square.
This, oh snowball, is my prayer." - Calvin, from Calvin and Hobbes

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

I like it! It reminds me of the Dragon Keepers Chronicles by Donita K. Paul. :)

~~~^@
Katie:-)

"We never need to be economical in our imaginations, thank heaven."
-Anne Blythe, "Anne of Ingleside"

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

Very cool, Kay J!

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"I cain't be sure in the dark, but I think I blowed his head clean off."
~Grandma Lizzy - when asked what she did about the copperhead on her back porch

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

I like the way it kind of repeated...but not. Good touch.

"Now you've heard of the French Nation, and the British Nation....Well this, is the Imagin Nation." Kris Kringle (Miracle on 34th Street)