Sacred Rasberries

Submitted by Gabrielle on Sun, 12/28/2008 - 06:32

One bright day Three little ladies set out two pick the most delicious rasberries in all the land.
Ginger, Marie, and Sarah were there names.
Ginger was a smart quick girl with keen eyes. Ginger wanted the to make the most delicious pie for her brothers birthday.
Marie was a Wizard with expert skill who wanted the berries to make Duplication potions so she could be a Famous wizard all across the lands.
Sarah was a Dumb vain and Greedy girl who wanted the berries all for herself and to make sure that happens she would kill the Sacred Rasberries so no one could eat them.

The three little ladies walked and walked until they entered two Large golden doors and there in the doors stood a statue of a boy in a large golden robe with the inscription. Never Trust Greed.

In those very minutes when the inscription had been read Greed stepped out of a bush and started to work on what he thought the weakest link.
Sarah Sarah Look at that Beautiful Golden robe said Greed. You would look like one of the angels in it. and many more hours passed of Greed prodding and persuading Sarah two take the robe. And every time Sarah would give in just a little until. STOP she shouted! i cant take this anymore please! then she ran to the robe and tried to pry it of of the statue but then Sarah soon became still and statue like. And Ginger and Marie dared not touch the powerful magic that instantly makes a person a statue.

Soon after Marie and Ginger then Found a Small Door with the inscription.
follow one of the four paths and you will find them.

Marie went into the nicest purest rockiest of the four. but the path had a spell on it and marie never went backward nor forward no matter what way she climbed up the steps. soon getting frusterated Marie lifted her wand and dissapeared.
Ginger then chose the greenest best soiled path. and at the end found the Delicious berry tree.
and made the best pie for her brother.

The End

Author's age when written
13
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Comments

Hey, Gabrielle! I liked this!! I could really imagine it all in my mind. And I LOVE the title - it made me click on this story immediately! :)

Hey, Gabrielle! I liked this!! I could really imagine it all in my mind. And I LOVE the title - it made me click on this story immediately! :)

THANKS!

I really havent being paying attention to the comments. Im glad you enjoyed it

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