River Song

Submitted by Damaris Ann on Sat, 08/23/2014 - 18:27

A river of tears flows from My eyes;
Because of your sin do I cry.
You do not heed Me, and often fall,
But I am still your All in All.

I will give you life
And
I will give you peace
And
I will be your comforting Hand.

I will be your strength
And
I will be your shield
And
I will be your own strong tower.

A river of life flows within Me.
The blood and the water run deep.
I will cherish you and wash you clean;
I will not judge you unjustly.

Author's age when written

Genre

Poetry

Comments

Damaris Ann

Tue, 08/26/2014 - 00:22

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This was an inspiration of 15

This was an inspiration of 15 minutes! Let me know what y'all think. Critiqe it as harshley as you want, I wouldn't be a true poet if I couldn't take criticism! :)

I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.

Hannah D.

Tue, 08/26/2014 - 04:21

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So I read your poem, went and listened to River Flows In You (for the first time; it was so lovely), and read your poem again with new eyes - very nice! It's really a wonderful idea, to write a poem about a musical piece that inspires you. Welcome to Apricot Pie!

Damaris Ann

Tue, 08/26/2014 - 04:40

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Thanks a lot! That song is

Thanks a lot! That song is special to me because when I was a bridesmaid in my sister's wedding I walked in to that song. It has remained a favorite since then! I like a lot of Yiruma's songs because although none of them have words, they all say something to me. I have an idea for one or two more of his songs.....We'll see how that goes!
I really like the atmosphere here on AP and I feel like i already know some of y'all, I've read so much on here!

I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.