When life is rough it's hard to be tough,
But we must carry on.
We must remember that He is enough;
So we can carry on.
He has given the strength that we need
To bravely carry on.
So we will run and joyfully speed
Our cross to carry on.
I know it's short.
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Thank you Maddi! Also, I
Thank you Maddi! Also, I haven't forgotten you. :) I've been meaning to email you for a while now. I promise I will!
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
A great reminder of a
A great reminder of a poem!
The only thing is the rhythm is sort of off on the third line.
"My greatest wish for my writing is that it would point you to the Savior."
I tweaked it a little bit.
I tweaked it a little bit. There is still an extra syllable in the third line so I'll try and mess with it a bit more. Thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for commenting. :)
I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.
:)
Hey! Nice message :)
Very short, but good. It took me a few (five!) reads to get the rhythm, but once I had it it was great :)
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh