The Donut

Submitted by Tori on Tue, 12/09/2008 - 14:16

I walked, ran, skipped and hopped,
On my way to the Donut Shop.

The lady there gave me a smile,
And I decided to stay for a while.

Chocolate and sprinkled donuts galore,
But my favorite is at the back of the store.

Boston Kreme is the kind for me,
I love, love, love, love them, you see.

A simple donut without a hole,
With chocolate on top, it captures my soul.

The Kreme on the inside, waiting for somebody,
To bite it and break out in a beautiful melody.

I'm eating that donut on a hot summer day,
They're good in the winter, too, at least that's what I say.

On the street, in the park, or even at home,
In my bedroom, in quiet, where no one can roam.

I'm eating that donut, it's 11 at night,
And the time for a donut seems so right.

My sister says, "You really are nuts,"
I say, "I don't like nuts. I like donuts."

I love them more than cars, movies, or even my school,
Nothing 'cept Jesus is quite so cool.

Boston Kreme donuts are like no other,
Excuse me, I'll be back, but I'm getting another.

Author's age when written
12
Genre

Comments

My favorite doughnut is jelly filled. :D
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"The world will likely end tomorrow - unless postponed for rain." -Tamerah (on her blog)

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

hahaha u sure like donuts dont u?!!! :D
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... me myself and i aren't very fond of them though. .. but the chocolate covered ones. and cinnamon roles :p

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The unperfect person, in the unperfect world, surrounded by unperfect people, with an absolutely perfect God!

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The Truth will set you free.

o i love donuts!!!!

"Dancers are the Athletes of God"-Albert Einstein

"If dance were easy, they would call it footbal!"

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

Oh thank you!!! I wrote it like a year ago but I revised it a bit.

"Dancers are the Athletes of God"-Albert Einstein

"If dance were easy, they would call it footbal!"

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

'Nothing 'cept Jesus is quite so cool.' I love it!!!!!!!!!!

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The electric device I can’t live without... is a toaster!
-Joe Jonas

That's great! My mom loves Boston Kreme but my favotire is lemon jelly filled
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If you are offended by the truth-- that's how you know you don't have it! -Brad Stein

LOL
I LOVE Boston Kreme donuts, too! They're so squishy and fat and chocolatey and luscious...

Excuse me while I go drool. :D
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

OOO don't tell me about them you are making me hungry...

Then again I'm always hungry ;)

"Dancers are the Athletes of God"-Albert Einstein

"If dance were easy, they would call it footbal!"

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

I love this, even though it made me really hungery! But, I'm always hungery too, so yeah.....I like glazed, and chocolate covered, and kolaches are good too, even though they aren't a donut!

"Every recording studio needs a rubber chicken." -Joe Jonas

"My red hair gives me superpowers!"-some person's t-shirt

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

oh this is a really random thought but that puppy is so cute...were'd u find the pic???
Anyway i'm sorry, u can hate me if u want, but i have NO idea what a kolache is :)

"Dancers are the Athletes of God"-Albert Einstein

"If dance were easy, they would call it footbal!"

“Oh Ronnie! I can’t believe you’re a prefect! That’s everyone in the family!” said Mrs. Weasley.
“What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?”
–George Weasley

I'm more of a chocolate covered doughnut kind of girl! =]

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The electric device I can’t live without... is a toaster!
-Joe Jonas

oo wen i eat them me too! (chocolate)

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The unperfect person, in the unperfect world, surrounded by unperfect people, with an absolutely perfect God!

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The Truth will set you free.

This was so funny! I liked the last line that said: "Excuse me, I'll be back, but I'm getting another." Very joyful!
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