they sow
tryst, fight their woes with burgundy
bleach their teeth in lies
romanticize their plight
and fantasize in yellow
hyacinths, basking under an indifferent sun
beached on a grassy knoll
the sun will take its toll
while the pull of the promise precedes
this, an isolated chastised moment
a finger wagging sharp
between two eyebrows barred
and scarred, from raising at another
bliss, it's neither here no there
but lies in shoulderblades
a soft skin for a stage
a play, put on by fingers
indeterminate, so it's not needed
so the deep sky doesn't fall
down so hard at night and call
pshaw, you were soiled ten degrees
ago.
Comments
SARAHHHHH you just made my
SARAHHHHH you just made my week! And it's been a pretty good week, so. You are so lovely! I could trade compliments with you all day, because your poetry always feels like the pinnacle of expert, delicious writing to me and for you to say that means so much. ❤❤❤ Thank you thank you thank you!
I LOVE IT!
How have I not read any of these masterpieces!!!!! Ditto to Sarah!!!! I wish I could express how impressive and masterful these are!!! Love!
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
*heart eyes*
*heart eyes*
I WISH I could write poetry
I WISH I could write poetry as well as you do. That's all I can say.
And I've only done the first read, but I REALLY know I love a poem when I don't even pay attention to the meaning at first...just sail through the deliciousness of the words.
You're seriously such a master at what you do... When I read this, I was (not kidding) visualizing it as print on a glossy magazine page.