Your poetry always hits me viscerally before I can ever process it mentally (which I usually do on the second read, and which is my favorite type of poetry -- the kind that startles me physically first). I stood above the world and dove down with that bird....felt the wind shuddering in my wings. It felt like such a transition through life, too, a trust-fall. My favorite lines were "an earthborn comet". And I loved the mythical sound of "and here lay / the known way / and there falls / the presumed all." Gorgeous poem!!

Your wording is spectacular! I would definitely say I agree with Sarah Bethany, I felt like I was taken on a fanciful but also intense trip! All of it was great, the imagery, the wording, the flow! Loved it!!! Keep posting my friend, this is great!

Thank you much, ladies! <3