Devoted, Committed

Submitted by Madeline on Mon, 02/09/2015 - 15:22

Landscapes
Painted in
People and adventure
Backgrounds of gold
And silver and white
Purity abounds and
Laughter abides
By the rules of what I
Find amusing
Scripts
Penned by my
Own lavish hand
Committed to optimism
But devoted to
Realism
In every other way
That someone can
Be

Author's age when written
17
Genre
Poetry

Comments

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Mon, 02/09/2015 - 15:39

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"Scripts
Penned by my
Own lavish hand
Committed to optimism
But devoted to
Realism
In every other way" Love!

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Maddi

Tue, 02/10/2015 - 00:15

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Great flow, and ditto to the others :)

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh