Stone Cold

Submitted by Anonymous (not verified) on Sun, 09/28/2008 - 15:12
A sweet innocent child
So young and pure
Your features alight with joyful enthusiasm
That was so many years ago
What happened to the loving person I knew
Your eyes have hardened
Your features stone cold
Though you're young
It seems you've grown old
There is a battle raging between us
But you will not put down your sword
I've already surrendered
I thought there was hope
But I was mistaken
You lost your heart
You have turned to stone
Author's age when written
12
Genre
Poetry
Tags
memories
family struggless

Comments

Paula J

Mon, 09/29/2008 - 20:49

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man, i really liked this one. it's really good. love it!! =)

~All men were created equal, then some became Marines~
*Death smiles at everyone, Marines smile back*
gotta love the Marines!!

Anonymous

Tue, 09/30/2008 - 17:03

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Good job!

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joe jonas...the reason I forget to breathe! <3

Anna

Tue, 09/30/2008 - 20:53

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This is really good.

And, Emily, your signature totally made me laugh... sounds just like something I would say. :)
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Love me, love my friends.
-Anne of the Island

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

E

Thu, 10/02/2008 - 03:51

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Wow, very passionate. Lol, Emily, your signature's funny. That's how I am about Nick Jonas....

-Falling Leaves

"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

E

Sat, 10/04/2008 - 02:07

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Thank you =D You know what I just found out? That I'm obsessed with these smiley faces =D =P =) =] :P :D :] :) :-] :-) :-D :-P ;D ;) ;P ;] haha lol

-Falling Leaves

"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Anonymous

Sat, 10/04/2008 - 03:23

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I love smileys...

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joe jonas...the reason I forget to breathe! <3

The Brit

Wed, 10/29/2008 - 01:02

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Hey, this poem is great,though sort of depressing. So sad. But still reall, really good (clapping enthusiastically).

What is it with you people and the Jonas Brothers?!
They are so RETARDED AND POINTLESS!!! You bad people! Be punished severely!! No! NO! Bad! Ok, I think you get my point (smiling innocently).

"Inconceivable!!"-Vizzini

marie (not verified)

Sat, 12/20/2008 - 06:37

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Thank you :) Yeah, it is sort of depressing :P I like your sig. Very true.
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"I'm a dishonest man, and a dishonest man you can always count on being dishonest, It's the honest ones you have to watch"
-Pirates of the Caribbean