Take a deep breath
And ask yourself
Why do I really like him
I would be the envy
Of everyone
I would be the girl
He put his arm around
I would be laughing
All the time, every day
I would be chock full of
Hyped-up butterflies
I would be listening
To the sound of his voice
I would be loving
Every singular moment
Just because
And take a deep breath
Ask yourself
Now is that going to happen
Bite your lip
Close your eyes
Take a breath
No
So Kass writes inspirational fiction, and I write this. Hm. Oh, and um, also...sorry for more poetry. I'll leave the homepage now. Crud, I have three things on the homepage and feel like I'm monopolizing. Well, anyway, EVERYONE GO READ SARAH BETHANY'S 'I Have Sometimes Loved', just because. Feedback is always welcomed.
Comments
I liked this. I didn't feel
I liked this. I didn't feel quite as much emotion behind it as some other poems that you've written recently, but I still liked the way you worded everything!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Thanks, Maddi! And
Thanks, Maddi!
And Erin--yeah, I know what you mean. Read it over several times, just am not feeling it. LOL. :P I think the poetry bug is FINALLY LEAVING ME. Now you all can rejoice! haha
Hmm!
Honestly, I liked this one a lot!!! AND I AM SUPER SAD TO HEAR THAT THE POETRY BUG IS WEARING OFF!
LOL! I laughed at your notes :P
"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!
haha
Your note made me laugh... :D You're the best. And you can monopolize the homepage all you want... we love your stuff.
This was depressing, but in a good way - it made me feel all achey and longing. I want butterflies, too!! :P
Since I've already read Sarah Bethany's....
This was sweet.
"I would be chock full of
Hyped-up butterflies"
I really liked that line.
Write more fiction!!
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh