He's Not My Only Sunshine, But He's Close

Submitted by Madeline on Sun, 10/20/2013 - 02:08

He's not my only sunshine but he's close
He touches where the rays never do
I soak them in
I soak him in
They equally manage to break through
My skin is putty in their hands
Or liquid, if they please
But whereas the sun's touch is vital
His is all I need

Author's age when written
16
Genre
Poetry
Notes

but this came into my head. sorry.

Comments

Kassady

Sun, 10/20/2013 - 18:07

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Beautifully written! What powerful wording. NEVER stop writing poetry! It's the best release in the word.

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

E

Sun, 10/20/2013 - 18:30

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This is beautiful and such a great analogy! Write what you feel like writing-I like all of it. :)

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Gina I.

Sun, 10/20/2013 - 19:08

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I know someone like that, actually...
Beautifully done, I must say.

insert something inspiring

Maddi

Tue, 10/22/2013 - 04:57

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Don't apologise! This is really sweet and cute and I enjoyed reading it.
Oh, and I did the essay thing!!

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh