Rose Thoughts

Submitted by Maddi on Mon, 10/07/2013 - 02:43

1. If They could Think

Peach tinted lips and
Vintage-stained pages
They flitter their
Helpless souls as
Hope dawns.

Grey cardigans
Bow petals
They're
Pink soiled

2. Gossip Girls

Whispering gossamer lips
To the silly bluebirds
Their scar-ing rumours

Bling-ing their diamond drops
Showing their stars
Throwing their coveting
Glances

They hurt so many

3. A Musing

If roses could think
The world would be more
Hopeful.

If the world was more hopeful,
There'd be more kindred spirits.

Including the roses.

4. Pearl Roses

These secretive thoughts
And alluring eyes
But pure hearts
Coloured white, glowing orbs

5. Reality

Sunlight dawns
Its rays bright, bright

They shrink down
Into their dim
Darkness...

Like forgotten souls.

Author's age when written
15
Genre
Notes

I have lots of other, better poems I could put down. But these found their way on the publishing page. Very strange. Enjoy!

Comments

I like these. They're very vague, though, so I found no connection in them that I can make. I like the title. All these poems had an old antique-store feel to them. It's almost like I was walking through an old shop, looking at old things, reading these poems. One critique: on the last poem, it's should be its.

Thank you. They are so vague, I don't even feel connected with them. Really weird. But thankyou--old antique store, cool!

Haha, thanks! I'll fix it!

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh