Rush

Submitted by Bernadette on Mon, 05/14/2012 - 21:58

Why does a gale rush past
like thoughts in my mind,
or a freight train
running through the dusk and the dawn?

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Tue, 05/15/2012 - 20:56

I like this, even though it is short... It feels like either a beginning, or an end of something.

Wed, 05/16/2012 - 05:13

I like it too! It definitely feels like the end of something to me.

Wed, 05/16/2012 - 13:43

I'd love to see a longer version with this at the end.

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Wed, 05/16/2012 - 15:06

Very nice, Bernadette! This is how I feel very often.... I can definately relate!

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine