Thunderstorm

Submitted by Madeline on Thu, 05/26/2011 - 05:12

Part One:

 

Crash! News on TV

Announces there will be

A thunder storm

 

Dash! Downstairs to safety

I really am hating

This weather

 

Bash! The first bit sounded

My cat has just bounded

Into a safer haven

 

Mash! The blankets and chairs together

Wait out this thunderstorm weather

Until it passes on

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Part Two:

 

Whirl

   Swirl

      Curl

         Hurl

             Twirl

                Goes the little thunderstorm on this night.

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Part Three:

 

Thunder, weather, water

Boom, "news", swish

Mixing mashing molding

To create a thunderstorm

 

**These aren't very good, and mainly for appearence more than words. Like...art poetry! Hince the weird spaces and phrasing. ;) Enjoy and have fun! Feedback, please! 

 

Here's a complimentary dog:

.//^ ^\\
(/(_•_)\)
._/''*''\_
(/_)^(_\)

His name shall be Apricot. :D

Author's age when written
13
Genre
Poetry

Comments

Kathleen

Fri, 05/27/2011 - 05:52

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I like it. It feels a bit odd, but in a good way. Nothing major, but ''sounded'' is spelled with an n.

Madeline

Fri, 05/27/2011 - 12:34

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Thanks for your comment! :) And I changed "souded" ;) LOL! Typos, of course! :P One day I need to take time to just go over all of these! haha!