ipods aren't in the 13th century, Chapter 1

Submitted by Pristine on Tue, 06/29/2010 - 23:29

Chapter 1

Give it or " SHARELENE!"

 

" Give it back Gearge!" Sharelene shouted at her older brother. " Not till you give me back my phone!"."never!"."Then your Ipod shall die!"."Give it back, you one eyed pig!"."I'm not a pig,you pig! Now give back my phone"."No way! you over grown slug!"."Give my Ipod back!"."Waaa" cryed Martha."Stay out of it you nine month old baby" yelled Gearge."STOP FIGHTING, your giving me a headach. George give back her Ipod,and Sharelene give back your brothers phone!"."Yes Ma'am" Gearoge and Sharlene said. " Thank you... Now can we have some peace and quite". Silents."Thank you!"

 

Thump! " Ow! I hate moving!" yelled George, rubbing his shin. Sharelene laughed. Sharlene bobbed her head up and down to her favorite song by Owl City " I get a thousand hugs by ten thousand Lighting bugs, as they teach me how to dance" . " Make her Stop mom! she's going to make the windows explode" George faked a groun. " Why couldn't we leave this over grown baby in the woods outside the last house" .  George sneered and stuck his tounge out, and went back to complanning to himself. She rolled her eyes and said under her breath                 " Teenagers".  

" Alright everyone move your boxes into the rooms you want. I have the master bedroom this time ok George" Said mrs.Page, their mother. They both grabbed a box and ran off to fight over thgeir rooms. " No thoughing each other out widows please!" Mrs, Page yelled after them

"Ahhhhh" Thump, thump, thump. " Owwww" Thump,thump."Owwwwww" Thump... " Oh my body!.... MOMMMM". Mrs. Page ran into the house, " What Happend! George what are you doing on the floor" . " Sharelene push me" . " Sherelene did what! SHARELENE!!!". Mrs Page ran upstairs. Across the hall was a door strate ahead with a little sheat of paper that read ' Go Away', Mrs Page burst through the room. " Sharelene Macy Page You Threw your brother down the stairs!" she yelled. " No, I pushed him on accident". George frowned," How do you do a Karate kick on accident!?". Sharelene looked traped, " What! the room has Peace and Butterflie stickers all over it". " It wasn't like that when I went in" George Percisted. Mrs. Page went into the room. " NOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled George. " Sharelene! what have I told you, we don't put stikers on the walls"."Sorry mom". " You will pay for this!" George yelled and stomped off to a emty room and slammed the door...

Author's age when written
10
Genre

Comments

sorry Pristine about the languege. I was thinking about how their parents were divorced soooo I was thinking. Their just going through a lot. Sorry Erin West. But thanks for reading it

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Welll....... Most of it was Kassady's Idea. She was thinking because their parents are divorced, they don't have the best attetoods. I'm going to make it so that it gets better in the book. Sorry you didn't like it. But it will get better in time

 Welcome Pristine! Sorry I haven't commented yet, but I just haven't had the chance. I love your book and it's characters. So creative and funny, too! Maybe their mom should homeschool them. Is she going to homeschool them? I think that would be neat. 

Hope to see you soon! (wink wink) 

Your friend, 

HomeschoolGirl

i miyt home school lome do you like chapter 2 i love it your freind                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Pristine