I see that same old face in the mirror But the face has changed somehow Something’s there that wasn’t there Beneath my puzzled brow I frown as I examine What, to my surprise Has suddenly transformed Deep within my eyes They are still the same color They have not grown in size But now I hold a secret Deep within my eyes Their gaze has turned to hardened stone The fire behind has died There is a sad reflected soul Deep within my eyes
Comments
Wow. That was really good.
Wow. That was really good. Inspiring; sad. Over all well writtenand easy to relate to.
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"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis
Lovely...not depressing, but
Lovely...not depressing, but very...somber. I like it very much.
I like it too. Very
I like it too. Very thoughtful
Formerly Kestrel
Hmmm, interesting. Good
Hmmm, interesting. Good imagery, I thought. Very simple.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
So sad...wonderful and
So sad...wonderful and well-written, but depressing nonetheless. :(
Katie:-)
"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS