Frozen

Submitted by Mairead on Wed, 06/02/2010 - 15:17

frozen in time
since I saw your eyes
I guess that's why
I still dream that you're mine

because I'm frozen in time
the time when everything was fine
something of sublime
life was my lullaby

I have a one track mind
why oh why
stuck in my mind
you and I

this dream is just a dream
can't turn wants into reality
it will take me long to see
some things will never be

I'll just try to live in my head
cuz there we're better best friends
but oh, it's all pretend
and it has to end

we're really dreaming now...

Author's age when written

Genre

Poetry

Comments

Clare Marie

Wed, 06/02/2010 - 16:58

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Mamie, this is

Mamie, this is wonderful....It's so haunting and quiet and sad. I especially love how the ending just kind of fades away.

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Anonymous (not verified)

Wed, 06/02/2010 - 21:24

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I like this. The rhythm was

I like this. The rhythm was probably my favorite thing and the last line.

Mary

Thu, 06/03/2010 - 04:00

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I second that, Clare Marie.

I second that, Clare Marie. Lovely, Mairead.

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!