The length draws tightly to a close Light wakes slower from its doze Flights of clouds draw in closer North the air sails cold and bitter Yellow branches hang in array Blue brighter, clearer, and gay Pages opened upon laps of wonder Afternoon passes with growing slumber Warmth abundant, nightly chill Moisture in air, wind on hill Gaily, freely, children ran Under sunlight’s golden hands Goodbye to thee! Goodbye to thee! Dear and lovely summer!
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I really liked this, especially the end, "Goodbye to thee/ goodbye to thee/ dear and lovely summer!" Makes me want to say it out loud. Very sweet, and lovely. :)
<3, Hannah
Oh, I like this! Pleasant
Oh, I like this! Pleasant picture.
Wonderful rhythm, really
Wonderful rhythm, really sweet! Great job!
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
wonderful!
beautiful! stunning!
I'm with Hannah W. on this
I'm with Hannah W. on this one. "Goodbye to thee, Goodbye to thee, dear and lovely summer!" I think I'll go stand at the top of the hill in front of my house and sing that out over the valley and the woods. Reminds me of Anne of Green Gables. Lovely!
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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!
I like this. :) It's very
I like this. :) It's very sweet and simple. Well done!!
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]