What am I?
I snatch your words, rattle them, and banish them to silence.
I fill sails, drive waves,
Pin clouds in the sky.
I play in the trees and flirt with the rain,
Singing songs no one can capture.
I am like a thread of time-
You cannot cage me, cannot hold me…
Yet you feel me.
I am strong.
I am gentle.
Flee my fury!
Embrace my caress.
I am unpredictable,
Flighty,
Fleet.
I raise the sun from its bed and send it home again.
My mind is too changeable;
Trust me not or leave yourself to my whims.
Run from me! …No-
Dance with me.
I am cold, so cold.
Hear my song, long and mourn with me.
Do you pity or tremble?
What am I?
I am the wind.
Comments
It depends on how quickly I
It depends on how quickly I (in Elvina's head) can figure out a way to escape the castle. And how quickly Cala wants to cooperate with me so I can see into her head and discover what she's thinking. Both significant factors.
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
Ah, yes. Those could both be
Ah, yes. Those could both be rather important. Carry on--and tell Cala to hurry up and Elvina to keep brainstorming.
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
Nice poem, Anna! And I'm
Nice poem, Anna!
And I'm looking forward to the next chap. of Darkness in the Heights.
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I like it. :)
I like it. :)
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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]
I knew it was
The wind. Nice poem
Formerly Kestrel
Thanks!
Thanks!
I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief
This is...brilliant.
This is...brilliant.
That was awesome, great job!
That was awesome, great job! *coughs awkwardly. Sooooo.......How's DitH going?......Anymore soon?.......Ya.......... ;-)
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond